Simon. Overall it went well enough, well done.
I use superglue a lot. The tube on the rudder, as its long and has a large contact area could be superglued on, and finished with a fillet of PVA, same with the nuts `n` bolts, a drop of superglue would lock them up easily.
A semi-circular thin cover could go on the front, a bit like my Hobbies Hydro to cover the bolts and also make the box more aerodynamic. you might find something that just fits over, or use card.
The rudder was a bit wobbly and perhaps a wire brace or something might steady it up. As you have found, vibration can be a killer, and if the rudder starts vibrating……
Ashley